[ZeeDee]

sensitive vs zombie takeover... interesting to read

Adonis - This was a great detailed topical writing... the poetical narration kept it colorful and put the character details you used creates an emotional connection with your readers. your details are nicely drawn out.. flow was moire on the simple side of things in my opinion, but it was still very enjoyable. I hate emotional baggage, but you played on that well and did a good job with this..

Mic... This was nice and i like zombie shit a great deaal. the blood and gore of a good zombie feature flick is dope and you did that nicely here. The flow was moire on point in some sections than in others, but the details and the dsciptions kept me reading. it was kinda obvious in the narration as it kept going so the ending wasn't much really, but i liked the details of it all. needed more of an original outline for the narration i think. like the zombie doing something that we all don't see in every zombie flim... that's kinda hard to do with a theme that's been done so much so i'm sure everyone is saying this concept is kinda played.... i guess it is... i liked it tho... but it is...

Vote Adonis.. just more creative in his narration...