[dead man]

master roshi / pack of locusts / bragadocious.

nice

for some reason i expect your writing to begin reflecting a more progressive rap type of style. a la chance and vic. aka my city's personality.

i sort of liked this but i have definitely seen you do better both rhythmically and conceptually. this felt a bit lackluster like you were trying to take it somewhere it just wasn't ready to go. the effort and intention was there but the execution sort of lagged for me. but it was fun to read and its nice to see you even writing and posting again since your impromptu hiatus. there were some dope segments like he googol centigrade that actually taught me something. the way you spelled bourgeois killed me though. i guess its pronounced differently but idk. anyway come home soon g. grease your wheels. but i understand priorities are what they are.


see you around splitoris


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