[Adonis]

Keith, the concept behind this is simply immaculate. I have strange beliefs in life regarding death and after life this shit opened my eyes on a touchy subject. The voice of God, at least I presume who that is, those stanzas had superb flow. This style you own. Verse's written in said tone would be worthy of crown in these parts no doubt. The rest flowed good, but there of syllable counts here and there.... Understand it completely.Fill a bit uneasy....then solid flow... Doubt of his mission..bound to get missing...however the later line is not how a normal conversation would or would be said. Points off for taking the flow route over content, not like you, find the happy median. All in all. A verse about the purpose of life, yet you actually touched on said true purpose on so many philosophical levels containing decent flow and still maintaining elite content is flooring. A rare talent you have while firing in ask cylinders. Enjoyable read. Thankfull I am.

Mike rizzi, most of the wording and phrasing is so dope, but you know me. The first stanza was to tough to get through. I hate the line breaks into a full bar for rhymes sake. It doesn't work for me because, I know this isn't audio but it is to me, if you were to read aloud or record and re-listen those lines would destroy flow over wax. If that. Makes sense. To you. Mike. The concept is rather dope, I felt like the use of pictures, although original is cool, s bit cheap. This is a game of words,you should be able to explain those pics clearly with out ever having to post them, and I would get the same point across because of your level of skill regarding detail of words. All in all, great concept, decent execution overshadowed by images, someone else's images, rather than (not then) words


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His verse not only resonated on higher level, but was just more enjoyable for my personal preference's sake

Truly dope battle, honestly a top 3 of entire season easily. Mike. Your verse would have won against 95% all verses this season,regardless of what I perceive as errors. Fantastic story and concept, again, Ra just wrote onto my heart strings si joto