Mike, this started out dope but drifted into a not-so entertaining read. I felt the story you had going was stagnant, there wasnt nothing really that made me say "dope". Thats not to take away from your imagery though, was classic. Could paint it all perfectly. Just that I couldnt get down with the story it just needed something idk what. The pictures dont really help the story any, it annoys me if anything. Your imagery is dope enough, no need for the photos to represent it more. Not bad though overall mike.
King, This was dope man Ra. Although it did start off slow, you more than made up for it. Loved the take on the topic, it was pretty refreshing to read. Your flow was on point for the most part, wording and wordplay as well. The opening verse seemed a little rushed, force wording especially at the end. But other than that, I have to say this was my favorite verse to read this week. Good shit king.
V. King ra
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