[big baby]

Wrote a long feedback, did it get deleted? Will edit this within the day.

Thought neighbors hull of a slave ship line was absolutely cool. The leading up to it was nice, and the obscure reference to a ships hull is actually quite a zinger. Also, the pirate like theme is awesome. I love pirates. Skulls of the vanquished. I read this verse first.

Getting Drunk in Washington protesting funerals with Westboro Baptists after
You forced this laughter watch you grab ya throat vomiting
Addicted to holy water promethazine ready to accept Morpheus peace offerings - Paradigm

Awesome. The wording was a bit off kilter. But that was good enough for me. I'm not that big on flow nowadays because I'm getting old. But this was pretty cool. Actually awesome insane imagery. Not exactly my cup of tea, but still good enough to give credit too. lol.

"I'm eight parts phalanx, nine percent gold digger
Five percent 5-Percenter, cypher set stone slinger
Prescribing final deaths to idle lines of vets, no zingers" Sounds like something I'd rhyme that you wouldnt like. Your entire piece was like this. Dope.