[Cereal_Killa]

ng:
Howl'dee story was cool, subtle for its content but still delivered with presence.. Vocab was a lil shaky at times but then at others ie..

my love is pure and beauty's free, no fees, duty free.

^ Nice layered line.. I'ma bit of a fan of that..

overall though this wasnt anything fantastic, its aite def had sweet points to it like the story itself.. though not out of the box, it flowed nicely to the characters revelation of the situation.. Which i enjoyed.. Green n Gold :P

Wit:
Hey umm are you unaware of how obviously huge your sig is i'm just sayin i believe you should make it bigger.. just sayin.. Well well well this was nice.. the take on the topic was cool, your all round flow, structure and emotion was all A grade.. Story itself of a broken man with a broken heart was depicted well and tbh this was a rather strong verse on all aspects.. Pretty solid mate..

vote = witty

I think wit done took this with brute force.. soz NG enjoyed the read guys..