This read fairly smoothly. I thought it started out pretty slow and boring, but you really caught your stride about midway through the verse and it got better and better. Way to pick it up. The lyrics were, like I say, easy to read, you could catch the rhythm of the piece very easily. But that being said it wasn't like you were really saying much, was just kind of mundane. Then, like I say, it really picked up substantially and it felt a lot more real during the latter part of the verse. Overall this was a solid piece, good job, Witty.
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