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Old 04-02-2014, 12:47 PM   #10
Vulgar
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Cool keystyle. You commanded a good amount of swagger in some lines. Writing wise and mechanically, you are capable of more, I think. Maybe I look for a greater degree of complexity than I used to... being concise and to the point is an underrated quality to a drop. You achieved balance here.

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