mic.
usuall dopeness you come with. thoguht this was outstanding...for some reason the first line stays with me..i dont know why.
it not really something outragously dope..infact its pretty simple....it just set the tone for me...and you never let that die
through out your piece...i thought that was a strong point for you. felt like you could of made the story a bit more compelling..
thats the only complaint.
Nis.
its apparant you alot of writing skill..you have this very technical flow to your stuff...like its very percisioned lol. thought this was no
exception. great imagery tbh, i thought that was the biggest thing i took from this..and its fitting i mean the route you took with the topic
begged for some dope imagery and you didnt disapoint. felt like you stumbled a bit here and there but not enough to effect your piece
that much...
overall
mic created a scene of horror and shit..while adonis seemed to approach the topic with a more cerberal aspect. pyschological even.
i gota great sccenerio and vibe from one..and some great imagery along with some impressive mechanics with the other.
great battle folks i know i say that alot but its the leagues fault..in the end tho ama go with adonis on this one..she dropped a solid verse
adonis.
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