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Old 04-02-2014, 12:43 AM   #6
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whats the purpose of faith, do you deserve to be saved
I read this as a question...a powerful statement to me really.

this verse was really deep in a subtle way by being raw and uncut without any pretentious wording and cryptic phrase to hide true meaning behind.

flow and pacing where hot, this was very strong to me:

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no one exists, not you, me, him, her, or the coma your in
the aroma is rich, enough to sell your soul for a hit
but the coldness is thick, and your clothes have been stripped
the belt you wore doesn't bare the type of gold that it did
frozen and stiff, eyes wide open like your focussed as shit
you bend the rules and hit the wall, but the ropes never give
your gut feels like an ocean of ribs, broke into bits
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