someone post some text in here and i will pick it apart and show you what you are all doing wrong. pick your favorite battle from your favorite battlers, your favorite open mic whatever. can be your work or someone elses.
i will point out everything you or they are doing wrong and help lead you in the right direction
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EVERYBODY I KNOW GOT WEED OR GOT POWDER
BUT I AINT GOT EITHER. GOT ALOT OF DEMONS
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