[Witty]

Zygote - I wrote a piece like this, or rather the same sort of topic...we went in different directions but it definitely reminded me of it. This was a really cool piece, the language used was just unbelievable tbh really advanced, I can't think of too many people who could use vocabulary like you did here and egt away with it, usually it seems forced as all hell, but there are a handful who can and you pulled it off impressively. Really unique and original piece, flowed pretty well...could have been smoother but that wasn't any sort of problem for me, great read, really impressive writing...props man.

Frank - This was great...so original and fresh man. Their was a lot of humour in here too which was refreshing to see lol You wrote the shit out of this piece, rhymes upon rhymes...flowed perfectly. Admittedly it did take me a few lines to get into the piece but when I did it was a great read, there was no filler, every line was setting up the next line and the transitions were pretty smooth and seamless...I liked what you did with the whole whale thing, I can't imagine I would have ever thought of that, it added to the character a lot in my opinion, it was pretty fresh and unique, as was the whole piece tbh. A really enjoyable piece, major props man...just a laid back and expertly written story. I am impressed.

This was a great battle, more than worthy of a champ match....easily BOTW, both came with it and did their thing as usual. I gotta go with who entertained me more, the person who I thought was just really fresh and unique. Damn close though, but I gotta pick one, so..

Vote- Frank.