mac - the message was there. just the wording was off and the flow didn't work that well. it needed more inners and multis to be effective. I also caught the wind and mind end rhymes. that really confused me as to how someone would use those two together. but like I said the message was cool and I respect that.
patrown - used the more complex rhyme scheme and structure and was able to get an easy win. it was a little vague and abstract but it was more than enough to win. good job.
vote- patrown
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