[Mr. J]

This battle was cool both writers came with it
Time had a nice consistency to his verse. went all out it seemed
felt like a few parts had an off transitioning to it though
maybe its just how I read it but you did the topic justice
you brought a vivid outlook of how your verse works

Mike it seems like you have improved since the last time I saw you
you had the same progression your opponent did in fewer lines
which is cool. most writers tend to drag out the development of a piece
but it seems like you knew that you should stop before its too late
either that or you ran out of time. nice drop though

As far as my vote goes I am going to have to give it to Mike
I felt that the structure of his verse was morr fluent toward the end
Timeless had the same idea but seemed focused on hitting the linr quota
a few lines seemed like filler afrer another read but didn't damage the verse
the battle was dope though fellas keep writing