[Adonis]

This was a very dope battle. YDK, you dropped straight flow here, which is a smart way to combat Ziggie because his verses are rarely of the heavy flow but rather content focused. I know this story well, you did it justice in few lines, you Could have made this an epic piece and cut it short, which I don't mind at all,yet still followed the story. Kudos. The flow was much more structured this time around. You didn't rhyme as much as you could in each line for the sake of it,keep improving. ZYG. You're an asshole. This is a prime example of flexing the Dick and letting it swang low. I've actually, oddly enough, read a verse just like this in the rhyme before by either Ender or Cormier 5 years back or so. Either way,dope verse and again you reign supreme.

Vote Ziggie for out of the box thinking truly using the topic on multiple levels