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Old 03-28-2014, 08:40 PM   #6
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zyg, I felt listing all the moves might've been a little too much, but I enjoyed it. This seemed more like the type of verse that only really you could appreciate, I'm not saying its bad or anything its just not what some of us have come to expect from you.

day, I was digging it through most of the first half then it just fell off it seems. couldn't really get into it too much after that. that's not to take away how effortlessly this flowed though, the wording was crisp nothing really seemed too forced.

this is a pretty close battle imo, ydk had a cleaner verse, always a plus in my eyes to see a piece flow flawlessly like this with many inners that aren't forced. but zyg had the better approach here, and that's what I have to judge this on. good battle though

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