muh fuggaz,
ziggy topic was presented well and was interesting from the beginning. did a good job of generating interest on the concept alone which was outlined in the first few lines. The chess moves did a good job seperating the different segments and provided a cool format. interesting plot, very solid showing
ydk, interesting drop, read very poem like kinda, technically very sound. seeing the picture before reading set a nice tone that suited the subject matter. Scheme was consistent as fawk all the way through. Content wise, the angle had mad potential but the story never really took off for me. Felt like you did what you did well, but I think you would have needed a different angle to outdo ET
+1 Zyg
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