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Old 03-18-2013, 12:47 PM   #10
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Holy fuck. BOTW just like I knew it would be.

zygote dope verse as always but in some lines I wish you would shorten the lines actually as they come off a little long winded to me like the invisible threats line. But besides that minor hiccup I see absolutely nothing wrong with this piece. Truly a top notch piece. When I read the quote I really didn't see either of you going in this direction so creativity wise I have to give that to you because you pulled it off. Another great showing zy.
Frank the tank probably your most well written piece yet. I was literally blown away by your flow tbh. From the first word you seemed to be on your game this week and created a dope ass piece. As one of the voters said, I can't remember who, you do a great job using backgrounds in your pieces like the math piece last week. Very clever. All in all a well thought out and well done drop from you Frank.

Shit this is a little difficult tbh. Zygote has the creativity on this one, but looking at which piece I enjoyed more I gotta go with Frank. Great battle guys.
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