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Old 03-18-2013, 12:19 PM   #10
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Dope battle.
Adonis you brought one crazy ass drop man. The imagery your piece captured was fuckin brilliant. To me an easy read and honestly once I started reading it I couldn't stop lol. The scheme was simple but it flowed very well. And that devil burns in the wettest storm line was fucking dope as hell to me haha.
Mike Wrecka honestly man I've read much better from you. I always enjoy your pieces and this week was no different but it just felt like it was lacking something honestly. It was kind of the same old zombie apocalypse story with no real depth in my opinion.

So with that being said I gotta go with Adonis for the upset. Dope battle though fellas
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