Innovator - loved the poetic feel of this piece. I loved the showcase of colors line as well as the closing line. great vocab throughout your verse too. I wish you'd have spellchecked, cause it's interupting of the story when you gotta stop and me like wait... what? then re-read. overall though, I thought this was pretty dope. I look forward to seeing more from you in the league.
King Keith - This was good. I liked the direction you took with having a little snippet of each. flow was easy to follow, could have been tightened with some additional rhymes throughout, for the sake of mechanics I thought this a tad simplistic. But you carried the topic along nicely which means you succeeded overall. pretty nice, just add some complexity with internals I guess would be my only real advice.
V/ King Keith
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