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a nightmare without ending, negative emotional responses from the minds
the only thing left is to let ourselves be carried away by the winds
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Couldn't think of an accent that would make this rhyme.
Anyways, the piece was well written. Seems like your just creating an image of some dystopian society, or even our present day society. Didn't really get any new idea out of it, or a different point of view, but you still wrote what you did well. Good use of vocab too.
And the pic is sick