I like the flow, there was some smooth rhyming and the topic stayed pretty consitant.
It was kinda sick at some points but funny. I mean you could have just took the concept of sex and shit and ran with it but you narrowed it down into sex with a very skinny woman and made the topic pretty much have a point. I am usually not offended easy but I thought some of this shit was down right foul lol. Good job at grossing out a sick fuck like myself hahah, please check out my shit
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