Adonis- This was a cool piece after the first stanza. I feel like more could have openly related to the topic. This felt like an AOWL anthem, or an ode or something. I dug it, but on the face of it, it seemed like it was missing that enthralling factor.
YDK- Wow. This was straight forward, emotional, gripping and awesomely fucked up all at once. I really have no complaints about this other than it felt a little too brief. This didn't NEED more, but expansive stories are kinda what I'm used to. Great job delivering such a large dose in so little bars. Good Job.
I think this one came down to who was present. YDK definitely showed up and dropped a solid work with all the nooks and crannies that make a verse memorable. No explosive vocab or high level rhyming, but the heart of this piece pumped life. MVGT YDK
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