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Old 03-24-2014, 02:42 AM   #9
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this was cool as shit lol Vulgar it took me a bit to really catch the flow in your verse which is extremely rare but I thought it evened out and ended up being a really strong verse...except for the last line. clever but not exactly something i'm partial to-dissing somebody especially when not even involved in the match.
Frank, awesome take on the topic man. flow and imagery was strong as always and the story while not the most original had plenty of original turns of phrase with a sort of funny ending. also it was a nice tough adding everybody in the league to the pic while stating in the verse that the character was just making things look better.
I actually got Frank taking this slightly easier than I expected this week.
good shit fellas
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