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Old 03-24-2014, 02:14 AM   #11
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Vividlyvague. Special place in my heart for this verse. It was well received. An uninhibited, conceptual exceptionally gifted conversationist you are. A true writer, it shall be scary to see just how much you can elevate from here on out. No topic/picture/phrase is ever too much for the 'bombastic' vague. He, himself is his biggest obstacle. Hurdling his grandeur may catch on the moon. Not quite over the moon yet kid but most definitely a shooting star. You are putting together quite the variety pack of topical goodies.
Your grandfather was portrayed crazy and the normally psychotic nature of your writing downplayed that and kind of gave it a more 'even' tone. This had a nutty charm to it, I cracked a few smiles. Well done. And Thanks again.

Pinot grij
A lot of angst that fit with the idea of relics who dabble in graffiti. Good tone that resonated somewhat like a freedom fighter for me. The PSA was like 'cut the cameras' And you dished out how you felt forreal. I applaud your effort of writing for better or worse. They can't all be Alex Trebecks.
Sometimes they're Louie Anderson on family feud.

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