[Adonis]

Two dope verses. The story in JDUBs was captivating past the end, no real hiccups or missteps that I recall. You often take topic on at face value, especially the picture ones, which I wish you'd think out side the Nixa bit more. Oats, your concept is nuts, yet again. Flow decent, but writing an entire verse in a story format wrapped inside of well thought out conceptual verse about humanity, income and banking is dope. Banksy art of words is fitting. I thought you drew no connection to this specific topic, but rather used colors and art in general, but the final line did drawn connection.

Vote oats, better conceptually, deeper yet on par or just below flow and connection to topic. His good points out weighed just's