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Old 03-24-2014, 12:59 AM   #7
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Zyg you had a dope and original verse my dude. flowed amazingly and the philosopher references and storyline was a nice take on the topic.
Timeless you had an awesome flow as well along with a cool story but the one drawback was the quotes. It's always hard to write quotes in a verse that rhymes that sound like its something somebody would actually say, and I felt that you lacked in that department this week. everything other than that was awesome tho bro.
dope battle fellas but I gotta give my vote to zyg for the more polished verse
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