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King Ra. · 03-24-2014, 12:36 AM

BOTW. You both don't know how difficult this vote is for me right now. This should be a championship match because you both wrote like you want the title. Vulgar, you basically did what you do best, especially because of the picture you got this week, which most would agree fits your type of writing. And you tackled this the way I thought you would. I have to say though, what really impressed me was the fluidity when reading your piece. It was damn near perfect. One of the more polished work you've done rhyming wise. Nothing fell out of place. And what drove the smoothness of your piece more was the way you managed to pack it with so much content, without sacrificing the mechanics and just rhyming anything together to make it work. Excellent. While some may not have understood the content, I most certainly do because I've studied/read most of the subjects/concepts you mentioned in your piece, and I too would have probably wrote something similar. All in all, this was written exceptionally well, and you did the picture justice by describing every aspect therein in your own creative way. Good work. Frank, you too blew me away with your piece. Your writing doesn't have that same level of fluidity as Vulgar's piece, though for the most part, it reads well, but what makes your story stand out as almost always with your drops is the excellent descriptions and attention to detail that you packed in immensely. You went with your classic end rhyme style and just killed it from beginning to end. The amount of imagery is ridiculous, and I've noticed this season, it's been one of your strongest traits thus far. You managed to tell a story and then end it with a reality-like momento and I thought that graphic with the league members names on the very picture you and your opponent were writing to was slick and fresh.

There really isn't much more one can say on the positive side of things in relation to your pieces. They both went in different directions, but they both were extremely well written. So difficult to vote on a winner here. On one side you have Vulgar's exceptional writing, rhyme scheme masterful and a piece filled with great content and knowledge and on the other side a descriptive, image packed story that stays on point from beginning to end.

This one is a bit too much to vote a clear cut winner. I'm gonna come back to this and edit in my decision.

03-24-2014, 12:36 AM	#7
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	BOTW. You both don't know how difficult this vote is for me right now. This should be a championship match because you both wrote like you want the title. Vulgar, you basically did what you do best, especially because of the picture you got this week, which most would agree fits your type of writing. And you tackled this the way I thought you would. I have to say though, what really impressed me was the fluidity when reading your piece. It was damn near perfect. One of the more polished work you've done rhyming wise. Nothing fell out of place. And what drove the smoothness of your piece more was the way you managed to pack it with so much content, without sacrificing the mechanics and just rhyming anything together to make it work. Excellent. While some may not have understood the content, I most certainly do because I've studied/read most of the subjects/concepts you mentioned in your piece, and I too would have probably wrote something similar. All in all, this was written exceptionally well, and you did the picture justice by describing every aspect therein in your own creative way. Good work. Frank, you too blew me away with your piece. Your writing doesn't have that same level of fluidity as Vulgar's piece, though for the most part, it reads well, but what makes your story stand out as almost always with your drops is the excellent descriptions and attention to detail that you packed in immensely. You went with your classic end rhyme style and just killed it from beginning to end. The amount of imagery is ridiculous, and I've noticed this season, it's been one of your strongest traits thus far. You managed to tell a story and then end it with a reality-like momento and I thought that graphic with the league members names on the very picture you and your opponent were writing to was slick and fresh. There really isn't much more one can say on the positive side of things in relation to your pieces. They both went in different directions, but they both were extremely well written. So difficult to vote on a winner here. On one side you have Vulgar's exceptional writing, rhyme scheme masterful and a piece filled with great content and knowledge and on the other side a descriptive, image packed story that stays on point from beginning to end. This one is a bit too much to vote a clear cut winner. I'm gonna come back to this and edit in my decision. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.