[Mike Wrecka]

dope battle. BOTW potential

ZYG - sick fuckin verse. probably the best I have read this season from anybody. you finally went back to Zygote mode. the flow was godly. im in awe of how you could write something like this so quickly. being able to construct this in the short amount of time you did doesn't make sense tbh. but ya this was a walk through history with a modern perspective put on it. really enjoyed it. the waterloo referenced worked well. as did all the others. props


timeless - this is the best showing you have had on this site. you write a little differently than most here, you use a lot of rhymes in each line. sometimes that disrupts the flow a bit, but not here. this was a really well crafted verse. the problem with the verse is that the first half and second half really don't connect in any way. it is disjointed and I cant seem to make sense of it. the second half alone was the direction that I think you wanted to take. the perspective of someone trying to get their loved one to stop breaking the law by doing graffiti. interesting. if only you had made it cohesive thoughts. good showing none the less


vote -zygote