Adonis, not sure where exactly you were at in relation to the topic, if anything I felt this was more of an artists POV and an ode to street art lending its helping hand to the hiphop culture. Not sure how I feel about this piece overall, I’m never a fan of this extra short bar style, but the imagery was there for the as was the flow. I enjoyed it.
YDK, this was a cool little piece, little jay is a trooper. Great comparisons you had him making with his mother dying at birth and the war starting, really brought out a lot of emotion this time around. Your flow wasn’t as good as I’ve grown accustomed to seeing from you, but the story more than made up for it. good shit man.
Have to give this to dayday for a more enjoyable read. Both pieces were equal as far as the writing goes, but I just got more out of reading days than Adonis. Good battle though im sure this could go either way
V. YDK
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