[Adonis]

So this is a tough vote.Vulgar, you went deep with this, filling it chalk full of references that most,honestly I just didn't get. The rhythm was nice, you've grown a strong propensity to syllable counts which I don't recall FROM PR, nice upgrade. To me, this verse was face value about govt. And the world and woes we have. The recurring theme was thought being true,but being able to convey exactly,to the T, that thought is impossible. Nice concept. I can quote multiple lines, not because of flow although for the most part that was spot on, but for the content. Thank you for the read, I appreciate the thoughts and admire the talent. And I won last week ;) I wasn't sure about the cake thing in the end however.

Frank, I loved the ending stanza, a motivational piece for the competition of sorts. The flow was decent, I simultaneously appreciated and disliked the fact some bars are stretched for content sake and still rhymed, but that being secondary. The story was good, you are as always most descriptive. Rhymes were Def not V's level.


Not sure how many votes this battle will get because of the deep concepts and tough vote. I enjoyed both very much. You actually took similar routes in which you spoke of a man defacing and striping the world or govt. Down. While glare had a nice story, I did appreciate the depth of Vulgar's verse. The fact that he all but outrite said those, while a pictures worth a thousand words, thought I'd worth a thousand pictures.


Voting for Vulgar