Salutations, enjoyed the forceful entry of the language into the fray. As soon as it began it was clear that you know how to take advantage of a situation. It was an assault, the short rhyme schemes had a kind of statutory quality. The picture in of itself gives the feeling of rapelling or abseiling. The gun and the face form a sort of trapezium shape, and I think you identified and pinned down this construct. You really know how to play with and molest words to change the meaning of certain colloquialisms. The way you violated common writing conventions to make a serious point about the exploitation of the environment was excellent. Congratulations on the upload.
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