Both are good, YDK was more direct here, although this story was a little unambitious for me, which is OK if it something like a light hearted topic, but for its serious subject matter there was not enough progression or plot devices to hold it all together. Adonis had a more tangential relation to the topic, but squeaks through with the stylistic display, all other things being equal it was the poetic turn of phrase that tipped the balance. Voting for Adonis.
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