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Old 03-22-2014, 01:16 AM   #8
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Originally Posted by Rawn MD View Post
Lol... I just dropped an SnF peice...

But yeh man.. it started off solid..but then ur structure got in the way of ur scheming it appeared
like its almost if u just spaced it out wrong or something..
if u read it spaced diff, its cleaner...it may just b ur end rhymes tho, bc the scheming kind deviates a bit...

it had a lot of potential, but u just went a little to abstract in some places..

def a good attempt tho.

^lmao
Go read rawns swag and flow yo
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