Lol... I just dropped an SnF peice...
But yeh man.. it started off solid..but then ur structure got in the way of ur scheming it appeared
like its almost if u just spaced it out wrong or something..
if u read it spaced diff, its cleaner...it may just b ur end rhymes tho, bc the scheming kind deviates a bit...
it had a lot of potential, but u just went a little to abstract in some places..
def a good attempt tho.
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