Eh, this was alright, not saying it as dickish as geno did but he's right, you are better in the topical realm but its always nice to branch out. And if you dont keep writing like this you cant get better right? It was just too pg for me, wording wise ect. But I dont write like this either so I cant really tell you anything. I will however give the old horrorcore grimy verse a try someday. Anyways keep writing. Peace
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