Creep I liked the blackbox line but feel like it coulda been executed a lot better like you could said "her black box was more sought out than blah blah blah" we know a box is a snatch so it would been more effective.
Kwal I like the contender match line that was dope maybe because I you flipped everyones names like that. I also liked the airline punch, it was more effective even though it was kind of simple, it stayed true to current events.
Creep has potential but not effective with hits.
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