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Old 03-17-2014, 04:49 PM   #8
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yea your wording is pretty solid. it's crispy. i feel like you probably refine your lines from the get-go until they meet your standard, or trim the fat afterward. idk it's hard to decide on the process when i've only the product to view. this was pretty good. definitely resonated with more poetic allusions. conceptually i wasn't up on this. i give Abbie Cornish an 8.5/10. the film itself a 6.
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