when you 'c(see) sharp nine' you think hes somethin 'major'
but you 'c(see) sharp' prefers the 'minor' and ironically its minors that he endangers
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You lost to CB in UW? I'm bout to wreck him - my gall's known
But you had such a hard time with Camp I was thought you needed to call home
his best is still shit, fact is this a known fake
Even if flomax out, he wouldnt come close to reaching that pro state
flo real needs to work on making concepts more clear (and dont make them if they too complex), less expo better wording. the expo overall ruined the verse. endanger line concept was decent but it waasnt pulled off like it should have been. sharp came up pretty solid here with basic stuff. flomax out and camp line was enough to win this battle. this is one sidded battle so i'll go for sharp nine. keep writing fellas
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