Interesting match here. Probably the most difficult. Adonis, once again flexing your poetic, short lined style and once again it was well done. Your piece had a dark, gritty type of tone. You did a great job with your word choice. I wouldnt say storywise this was the best, it really read like a dark poetic letter, probably the aim you were going for, but outside from that a job well done. Vulgar, I'd say your piece comes second to Frank's from a creativity standpoint because this was pretty interesting read. Your main character runs into a dragon who smokes and they carry a conversation the whole time. Good direction to take. What makes your story stick out is the way you were able to go into detail within the dialouge which is very impressive.
I can see why this match is swinging back and forth because really you can't go wrong with either. I liked Adonis' extremely dark tone and Vulgars interesting conversation with a mythical dragon. Im gonna say V takes this because his piece has a bit more depth to it, and Adonis probably could have used a bit more material to get my vote.
MVGT: Vulgar.
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