Frank, I'm gonna say this now to get it out the way, this is my VOTW. The fact you managed to use all of the topics and string them together perfectly was great. Your creativity really shined here along with great writing mechanics. While others feel it was very random and nonsensical, I really liked how you put this together ending it with what I believe would be the main theme you were going for, and imo, it worked very well. Ink, you too showed great writing mechanics but compared to your opponent, which you'd really have to had put together a really good story, your piece didnt really lure me in as much. You did a great job setting an emotional tone, but there were times where you strode away from it. I loved your descriptions, the imagery you painted was nice, but your story though written well just came off more generic-like/basic.
While Ink put together a piece that could win against others, his opponent Frank was just much overwhelming, writing wise but really for me, the creativity displayed is what swings things his direction. Nearly flawless execution.
MVGT: Frank.
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