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Old 03-16-2014, 11:11 PM   #9
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As much as I hate to say it I got Frank taking this because of his creativity.
ink you had a verse that was dope as fuck flowed well very descriptive and a ton of emotion but I absolutely hated the ending/last line lol Frank you had a dope verse using alot of topics I was wondering how you were gonna end it cuz it felt random like you putting too much in but the last lines and closing it with the only topic that even could pull it all together was awesome.
The real difference maker wit this battle was the closing and I felt you both had superb verses but one ended it and closed it all better.
My vote goes to frank
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