prayer, love, independence. coke, sprite, ocean beds and open mic
hammer dance in polka dots. polka music, poker night
so precise, throw your dice. buy another overpriced
orgasm on the rocks. lemon slice. you're cold as ice
don't be nice, just sacrifice. hard smile like paper sand
fold your hand. find a hobby, origami, wave a flag
take a stance. defend it with your life, make a statement
^^Crisp flow.
Every time I read your writing I always find uses of alliteration so I assume by now that is not an accident. That may be why your writing is so revered here because you practice every element of writing and implement them into your works. But I don't think you do that. I think you just have a crazy brain that does it for you. Fuck now I'm rambling again. Well, this was good. Especially the section that I quoted but obviously I have seen better from you. I'll be looking forward to your next piece. Adios.
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