On my phone so it could be short.
Adonis: This is the topic I started writing to do its nice to see someone writing to it as well. This was very well written. I've always been a fan of your style that's poetic but flows very well. This was the same. The only problem is I can't see how the topic relates to the writing. I'm assuming that you're implying that the drums are what made him go mad?
Vulgar: This was the shit lol. Are you a pothead Focker? Anyway the writing in this was excellent and it was a very unexpected take as well. The flow was damn near perfect with the exception of the first few lines which were off to me. The story was also helped with small details like feeling doubt and things like that.
V/Vulgar
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