[Mike Wrecka]

great battle here. two very different verses and styles


Adonis - I love the short lines. when you use short lines it seems poetic but in reality that's how short lines need to be if you are going to spit to a beat, most of the time. depending on the BPM of the instrumental. so it really flows well to me. plus I just love the concept of saying so much with so few words. I strive for that sometimes but its not easy. this was a really cool enjoyable verse.

Dr. Jack, look at this vile place.
My name's Forsaken. Forgotten. Disgraced.
Darkness Procreates.
My Body.
My light.
My chapel.
Disseminate.
Please, Fix This...Yesterday."


that is just awesome.

my one gripe and maybe im retartded. its totally possible. actually its likely. but I don't see the correlation to the topic. maybe he is crazy so he hears drums in his head. that's really a weak connection to the topic so minus points imo for a great verse.



Vulgar - when I started reading this verse I thought , meh this shit is immature and childish. he missed the mark. but as it went on I soon became enthralled with the beauty of the mechanics and the superiority and complexity of the multis. then once the piece had my interest piqued you changed the tone and the piece while still lighthearted became more mature in content. really talking about the ramifications of smoking while still keeping that vicious flow.


overall - while I do like the short lines Adonis used, Vulgar showed why sometimes longer lines are better because it give you more room to perform these lyrical acrobatics if you will. Adonis did have the cooler story though, I liked the tone a lot. and he did have a really really good flow himself. all that considered I say tie but with Adonis' weak correlation to the topic Im leaning vulgar here. thanks for the read guys.


Vote - Vulg