Cyph- keep your head high. Celebrate their life as you mourn. Talk to someone close if you have to. Stay strong. Your piece was very heartfelt. I felt the aNxiety, anger, and confusion you displayed in your words. I think if you pour your soul out in ink it could serve as good therapy. Hope to see you next week. Be safe.
Zen- Even when you hold back you display above average. I liked all but that last line. I hope you post full in the OM because I actually was anticipating the read. I hope you show next week.
In closing, if Cyph's mechanics matched emotion, they would have the W in my opinion. I'm a fan of feelings and emotional conveyance in pieces. But it, understandably, came up short. MVGT Zen.
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