I know. I understand you guys are just helping and I do want to learn. If I didnt I wouldn't be here. Tbh I was in a bad mood when I got on here at first and I just felt like every one was attacking me. Lol. Im cooled down now though. I did say I'm going to take all of the feedback into consideration next time I write. I wasn't trying to do anything special with this piece anyways but thanks to all for the feedback I'll definitely work on it.
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