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Originally Posted by Nigma
Conceived in thirty three degrees of darkness
Harness evil shards of steel and carve
With scimitars, I cleave apart the trees in Eden's garden, weaving barkskin sheets of armor
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That was ill. Your verse was the perfect opener for the onslaught that was to come. Your verse had the best flow imo
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Originally Posted by Nigma
Modesty is hideous, subconsciously make pilgrimage to ghost towns
where confidence is transparent with each rhythmic sentence that's composed now
Sound the drums and heed the flung debris, smoking alklaline laced tobacco
The pineal gland expands every time you touch the outer rim of nature's asshole
CIA forsaken Castros populate fields of judgement, but I don't even like to listen
Never forget 9/11, nor the law that genocide forms the price of biscuits
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The bold made me lol. I liked the antithesis in the verse line I quoted from you. The bits and pieces that I did understand were really just spectacular, but I just couldnt comprehend some of it. Some of the references went over my head. Still, I have to assume that those parts were just as astounding as the parts I got. Awesome verse.
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Originally Posted by Nigma
Catch me sleeping on it, stereophonic teaspoon of Zzquil and Keystone Ice party tonic-
rhymes are my anti-klonopin, ride Janice Joplin's sarcophagus red- 80 higher the limit.
Calvin and Hobbes skiddin visions- the slippery slope to conscience on the dike's Radio Flyer coffin.
At least when we died it transmogrified me to awesome.
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The bolded also made me chuckle. The same could be said for you that I said to vulgar. Some stuff just went over my head. The stuff I did catch was great though. If I understood more, I'd be better inclined to say you had the best verse, but that's just a personal problem, nothing to be taken away from the piece itself I think.
Overall, crazy piece from some strong writers, and that's all I can really say lol.