The voice clear. Fairly crystal.
Grabbed a map – Whitechapel – A beckoning sigil.
Overpopulated. Stench of disgust.
Piss filled streets teaming with sluts.
Liquor breath Stagger. Gentlemen strut.
Breast cupped. Allowed to. Passionless.
Lucky Jezebel. Slit and tits – Ration-less.
Midnight's kissing hell
Darkness segregated. Fondled until evil escalated.
Battered foreigners Propagate.
Serpentine tongues rot-away.
On a carrousel. Floating atop Devils Bay.
Mmmmm, adonis I really liked tha part. The closing stanza too. This whole piece just had a beautiful feel too it. I wish I could write like that, truly. I really enjoyed the route you took here this week. At first glance I didnt think I was going to like it because I rarely like short bar but the was a chilling look into the doctors mind frame. Again I enjoyed it tremendously
Vulgar, lol I guess if you're going to write about any mythical creature puff the magic dragon is the one to do it about ahahaha. Anyways this was pretty good, definitely not up to your usual standards but good. I just didnt like the ending. It sort of felt like it was abrupt. It kinda sucks that you write all these beutiful pieces and almost set a standard for yourself that we expect to see.what I mean is for an average writer this would be a great piece but coming from you (whho's my top 3 favorite writers ever) it just seemed a little lacking. Great story though
Hmm this is interesting, I hate when my decision is so close lol. I like clear cut decisions but this week im going with what was more enjoyable to me and this week that was adonis
Mvgt=Adonis
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