[PancakeBrah]

"I'm here today, then taken. 'It happens mate'.
It happens mate. I'm cast here to look past the grave.
But I'd have no grave if I wasn't cast here for happenin's sake."

Favorite section.

I liked this. I thought it was pretty creative and was saying something. I didn't think it started off slow as I particularly enjoyed the first line. Keeping the same scheme throughout isn't something I usually do but it's a technique that's enjoyable to me as reader.

Good stuff.